The boy with the green eyes stood across from me, his slender frame creating a sliver of a shadow on the ground. He wore wrinkled swim trunks, his pale toes submerged in the lush grass that stretched as far as the eye could see. A grin was on his usually somber face as he laughed, breaking the walls he had built up for so long. The warm breeze tickled the tree tops, a whisper that blew from the gaps in the leaves. Time passed.
The sunset painted a red glow in the sky as we dined on the finest cherry popsicles. The heat of the day had changed the color of our light skin. The last monarch flew by, as if granting permission for the cicadas to begin their evening symphony. My hair had dried from our swim in the pond, and it now matched the tint of the sunset. I waved to the boy, a melancholy goodbye leaving my popsicle stained lips.As I walked home, black coaxed the sun out of the sky. The stars began to come out, shining brightly atop the dark background. The air adopted a chill, forcing me to slip on my windbreaker. I could hear the tap of my bare feet against the pavement as I hummed softly, harmonizing with the song of the bugs in the trees. A dog barked from the house next door, welcoming me home from my adventures. Midnight settled upon the earth as I closed my eyes and drifted into a soft slumber, the stars kissing me goodnight.



Hi Laura! Wow! Your work was really beautiful! I really loved the line "I heard downy birds chirp merrily from their nests..." that's so descriptive! It was really great!
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Taylor
Really good! I wasn't sure if this was in a fantasy setting or a modern setting until the mention of the boy's swim trunks, which is a good thing because your description of nature reminded me of enchanted nature from fantasy stories. I can completely picture the scenes and imagine being there, I love the whole ending sentence, it was wonderfully written. This piece was awesome!
ReplyDeleteWhat beautiful imagery in each paragraph, Laura. You've painted an idyllic scene I can totally imagine. I like the line about the cherry popsicles and the grin on the boy's face "breaking the walls he had built up for so long." I like the details about the monarchs and the cicadas, too. Very nice.
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